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My 8 sentences today come from the first draft of Seven Sisters, Chapter Two.
Kayla smiled, avoiding his gaze this time.
Damn, he had her cornered and she could read that gleam from a mile. Taking a sip of her drink, she went through her mental file on his recent charges. She thought she could guess what he wanted her for.
“What about you?”
He hesitated, which was interesting in itself. Rogan was always prepared, so she took the pause as an affirmation of her suspicions. He wanted her case.
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Nicely done with lots of questions and the reader’s curiosoity raised. Not sure which of them is in for a surprise – but one of them certainly is. Great #8
Thanks for the comment, Susan. Indeed, one of them is.
This is very intriguing. I definitely want more.
Thanks, Linda. There shall be another snippet next week.
Interesting, I liked the feeling in the excerpt, which sure makes me want to know more.
I’m glad it’s doing its job then. Thanks for commenting.
Nice excerpt. It makes me curious about the case.
Hi Elaine, thanks for reading. I’ll be putting up more over the coming weeks.
I like the questions this snippet raises. I want to find out what happens next.
Thanks Carrie-Anne. I’ll be posting more next week.
Hmmmm… I’m intrigued. What is it about this case that he wants it? I’ll be back next week.
I’m glad it intrigued you. Thanks for the comment.